After filming the last shots last night, we were able to incorporte these into the scenes whereby Abdul describes his experience at gun point. We chose to do this because we felt that the eerie and dark atmosphere of being alone within a city at night, anchores the emotions Abdul felt during this time.
We then showed this to our lecturers for feedback on any improvements. Overall they found the structure of our documentary was good and it included effective content, however, there were a few shots which we will change. For instance, near the beginning there is a moving shot looking out the back window of the taxi, our lecturers found this inneffective as it gives the idea that Abdul is driving away from something, contradicting against what he is actually saying. Furthermore, the first night scene does not have anything interesting happening, therefore, may cause our audience to lose interest, so we will change this to another night shot whereby the shutter speed is slower to make the image as a whole, more interesting as it is different. Lastly, Abdul is introduced to quickly giving no time for the audience to register the information, consequently, we will improve this by possible including a still image at the beginning rather than going straight into the documentary.
